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The Keys To The Lochby *Estruda

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Loch Earn at Lochearnhead scotland

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Critique by ~ryokley Apr 23, 2012, 5:12:08 AM

Nice work. You've got a good eye for the positioning of the model on the vertical framing. And it's a lovely outfit and a fun concept. I like the use of white space to accent the shape of the umbrella in the upper right. A few notes on technique. I'd like to see that same white space framing utilized on the keys in the left hand. They're getting a little muddled with the hill in the background. Also the color pallet feels a little too neutral. I'd push it a little warmer or cooler depending on your desired effect, especially since her dress is black. Also on that note, a light bounce on photo left would help give you some detail in the shadowed section of the dress and also help the keys stand out a bit as well. The model's pose is evocative and the whole thing has a really nice narrative. My suggestions would just help accentuate some key elements. Hope this is helpful. Well done.

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*allison731 Sep 29, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

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*Estruda Sep 29, 2012

Thank you very much ,very much appreciated ..)0(..

*allison731 Sep 29, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

You are so talented artist and I very often send these messages for you. Sometimes I feel uncomfortable because of many such messages. If these messages bother you, feel free to say me that and I will feature you without congratulations in future.

*Estruda Sep 30, 2012

I think it is nice to have a correspondence with each other its more personel and friendly,its allways nice to recieve feedback .wether it be positive or negative. In fact i have learned alot from critiques i have recieved that have helped me improve what i do .One of the images i sent to your group (The Raven Looks Out)recieved a DD yesterday my 2nd. and its all down to listening to comments and critiques and improving my work . Take care and i really love your group ..)0(..